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[dr_tectonic]

Huzzah! Proposal redraft complete! Round 1, anyway. I'm sure I'll have to do more cleaning-up later. But this was the hard part of it. I think the changes I made even make sense. We'll see once my collaborators have a chance to look at it...

P.S. to all the cold viruses in my system who made this take even longer:
You suck.