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Okay, I have a challenge for all y'all what have a big vocabulary.

I know that there are lots of interesting words for various rhetorical techniques, like: apophasis -- to bring something up by saying that you're not going to mention it.

I need a word for a technique I've seen in comment threads: saying one thing in normal text, and what you're really thiking in strikethrough. Example:

A: Despite some negative reviews, I really liked Halo 2.
B: You X-Box slut. Meh. I didn't think so much of it, myself.
A: Nintendo whore! No? What did you dislike?
B: I thought the graphics were ass a little sub-par and the storyline was OMG LAMEZOR! kinda weak.

So? What's the word for this? Surely there's some obscure glossary term we can repurpose to cover it...

Date: 2005-03-23 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] portlandpiglet.livejournal.com
I vote that we call this an "aside", in reference to the theatrical device of a similar nature.

Date: 2005-03-24 05:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dr-tectonic.livejournal.com
Hmmmm... it's close, but an aside is said in addition to whatever you're saying aloud, whereas in this case the actual "speech" is used instead of the strikethrough comments.

Date: 2005-03-24 03:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toosuto.livejournal.com
an aside is generally to add speech that the immediate conversation partner does not hear (even if they are standing right there) and clarifies the current situation dialogue more.

For Example:

KING: What news slave?

SLAVE: The news is good m'lord!

SLAVE: (aside) Thankfully he knows not of my plot to take his life when the revolution comes!

SLAVE: Your subjects are happy and love you a lot!

The difference is the strike comments are also intended for the immediate conversational partner to a humorous effect.

Date: 2005-03-24 04:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toosuto.livejournal.com
my pointbeing they work mechanically just like an aside. Think of the strike comments as meant not for the reply-ee but for the internet audience at large.